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  • drunkenninja
    +4

    Love it! There is just one little thing... would you be able to make the G look a little more like a G? The line at the bottom is a little too small and it looks like a C. I know I know I'm super picky and I'm sorry :)

    • imnotgoats (edited 8 years ago)
      +4

      Sure, I was having second thoughts about the typeface for the exact same reason. I'll have a little ponder.

      Edit: also, don't be sorry - I asked you to be picky! :)

    • Katherine (edited 8 years ago)
      +4
      @imnotgoats -

      I think it might be that your sofa's a little too complicated to translate into greyscale easily – it looks wonderful in colour, but with all the different shades of grey, it starts to get a bit busy, you know?

      I'm thinking maybe try getting rid of the rug, moving down the sofa (possibly making the arms/seat cushions the same shade), and using a taller typeface? Maybe Oswald, a personal favourite of mine, or something blockier, like Franchise or Natasha?

    • imnotgoats
      +4

      Okay, here's a bit of a reworking, also taking on board some points from @Katherine and @picklefingers.

      A little less busy, without the rug. The couch retains its varying tones but is now not complicated by the text. The typeface (Burford by Kimmy Design) is bolder and blockier, but has a touch of flair (we can also replace it with a block colour version).

      Again, I'm not precious, so if you want the typeface changed up again or anything, let me know. :)

    • drunkenninja
      +3
      @imnotgoats -

      Oh that is an absolute beauty! Thank you, updating the flag now :)

    • imnotgoats
      +3
      @drunkenninja -

      Glad to be of assistance :)