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  • BilboSwaggins
    +2

    Great story! I'm confused about the line "shanking him unconscious with my kitchen knife", but overall very engaging.

    • Aevitis
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      The idea was to have him knocked out by the bottom part of the knife, for which I'm not sure what the word is.

      • BilboSwaggins
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        I think it might make more sense as "knocking him unconscious with the butt of my knife" or something of the sort. Shanking makes it sound like he stabbed the Russian to me.