• LaughAtSky
    +3

    Definitely very good, especially considering you're only 16. However, I found the sounds a little harsh. I also felt the mix needed to be evened out a bit. Those main sounds are so much up front all the time, there's no room for anything else. I sometimes wondered whether there was a little too much compression too. I would have liked to have heard more variety in the arrangement as well.

    But I am being deliberately picky. Being a music producer myself, if I listen to something and it doesn't sound quite right to me, I automatically start taking it apart in my mind.